tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313799681501729309.post579369064622421896..comments2024-03-15T12:00:48.074-04:00Comments on Small Moments of Great Reward: A Plethora of Pantoums: Midway MarkAprilhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07722817835256485575noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313799681501729309.post-66044605760617159662011-04-16T00:12:54.555-04:002011-04-16T00:12:54.555-04:00the form is PERFECT for the subject matter because...the form is PERFECT for the subject matter because it creates the effect of scanning your memory with the key in hand and captures that forgetful quality--is it deliberate forgetting or innocent?<br /><br />As for the internal critic, we do an exercise in my creative writing classes where this critic is turned into an actual character in a story and addressed via dialogue. My own is my high school English teacher, who had a very red nose and wore panty hose that swished together as she patrolled the aisles of her classroom.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1313799681501729309.post-84803467697423218442011-04-15T07:38:22.297-04:002011-04-15T07:38:22.297-04:00Interesting. Since I do visual art not poetry it ...Interesting. Since I do visual art not poetry it made me think of what I would do with that rusty key from my past in a visual way. Definately NOT hang it on a string and wear it around my neck like jewelry.<br /><br />DarlaDarlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02729017606957829830noreply@blogger.com